Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

um easy win basically

SV basically got every aspect

50hater just make longer verses...this was a good opportunity to go 100 lines if you wanted since it was unlimited and you shouldve taken it...you only dropped 12 lines...thats not enough for a topical...i liked what you gave though...if you gave 40 lines with the words you used there with a little more detail and vocabulary you might have one but it was too short so there wasnt enough detail in it...

SV this verse was really really good...i liked it alot
it had emotion and detail the words you used were great and you managed to keep the flow great also...i like the ending it gave it more emotion too...beginning was good because it started like a story and ended like one...instead of jumping right into the battle or into 9/11 you introduced a little of the character which i liked a lot...

good luck to both no hate
return the favor when you get a chance...

peace

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