(since i dont have 700 posts....my vote is not official.....lol)
my "unofficial vote" goes to final.
basically.......you stayed on point bruh. para came tight too, however he drifted off of the topical that he had specifically set up....lol. so, going by the official rules of this match, final succeeds.
final...
your verse was dope. there were nice descriptions and alot of emotion in your drop. i was able to visualize the ruins you described with ease. your structure was cool and you had decent vocab as well. the only advice that i could give you....work on the flow a little bit. it seemed as though a few of your lines were forced, but other than that.......nice job homie. you got down.
para...
you had a sick verse as well. its too bad that you switched up the direction of the topical......that was what hurt you here. if anything, next time....leave the topic simple so that way you can play with it some more. your structure was damn near flawless and i liked your vocab. you had a clean steady flow throughout the verse.....so thats a plus. some of your lines were pretty funny, (haha) nice.....nice. i noticed in a few places that you hardly rhymed, try working on that some next time.
keep up the good work fellas. please return the favor.
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thank you. oner...
s.v.