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Old 01-27-05, 01:35 PM   #35
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Hot Sauce

ima give 2 dis u fam even tho u didn't even say da nigga naem u were battlin ya verse look pre written 4real..but since u had some cool punchlines and multis and some creativity u win dis...ec if u would of came with some creative shit u would of won cuzz u had some nice personals but dat was it i aint see no punchlines or no wordplay ya shit was basic..

opener-hot...ec good personal but dat godzilla shit was wack
structure-e.c....hot ya lines were 2 long even tho u were usin multis
punchlines-hot...ec i didn't really c nun from u
creativity-hot
multis-hot
wordplay-hot
personals-e.c he had about 3 or 2
finisher-hot
enjoyed-hot....nuff said

return da favor ya'll links r in my sig
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