alright look man no disrespect but that was shit very shit everything about it.
1 there was no emotion at all. 2 when i read it i did nt think u meant any of it.
3 just be yourself man stop acting like a gangsta your only 15. it takes a while to elevate just try harder next time and mean what you say.

oh and dont mind dick head s not given real feedback they probly sucked once 2man

peace