nice beat, i like how you put your voice lower in the background while you were talkin, yea, this was heartfelt,i liked your lyrics, your flow was good here, fell off at times,you seemed to be going quite fast, maybe slow down a bit so you dont stumble over your words, but find a balance, because you dont want to sound like your talking instead of rhyming, ok, you did slow down, towards the middle, you caught yourself, nice job with this man, i was feelin it..1

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