Thread: "If I Die"
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Old 01-27-05, 09:24 PM   #15
Van Ished
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From: Dallas/Jacksonville/Cleveland
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Delivery is blah, sounds like you don't even care on the mic. Flow is ok, with a better delivery it could sound better. The hook is wack, drop that and put some lyrics there, word don't really work on this. Up your delivery and it could be alot better.
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