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Old 01-28-05, 03:23 AM   #9
MaRVJay
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damm dis was a good i aint gon front..i gotta go with one step tho he came with some cleva shit and he had a good ryhme scheme...datz whuts up iggy ya verse was good fam u just weren't dat creative like he was...nun of u spit any personals but good battle overall....from both ya'll

opener-one even tho it was type played...iggy ya second line was weak

structure- a tie i could read both ya'll shit good

punchlines-one step he had some hott shit i was feelin it..iggy u had a couple but nu n really stood out like dat

multis-one step had like 1...iggy u had nun

creativity-one step takes dis 2...iggy u had some but not more than him

personals-nun from both

enjoyed-onestep....took dis battle..iggy good shit tho just try da be more creative and use personals

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