convicted, for some reason i liked your shit but u need a lot of work

good: ur 2 and 3 verse were tight, good rymes and vocab could use an upgrade but not so much needed..

bad: ur first and last verses, not a fan of those, seems like every line took an hour to read.

no hate my friend keep postin and keep workin hard id say 5/10 "RETURN THA FAVOR"

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