Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN
WickedClown you had an aight verse there were some good parts in it a few good punches & personals however the flow and structure weren't as good as they normally are and that effected ya verse in a way...i felt it on the lyrics side of it and thats most important at the end of the day...it was a good verse bars i liked best were
Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
^ liked the repetition of the opener and closer not many prolly picked up on that though
Pop better flow and structure definitely i'll give you that but punchwise wasn't really dope material a lot of bars were weak rhymes and they only work best in audio because of accentation and that harms ya verse i learned...also it was very unorthodox the layout which wasn't equal so some bars didn't flow well but it only happened in one bar real badly and it was this one
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
And also ya best punch which was good...but i think WC got this coz more was put into it than you...so he gets the vote.
No open battles...therefore no 3 day limit
