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Old 01-28-05, 12:42 PM   #16
MaRVJay
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Voted For: J DOT

i gotta go with u fam u take dis cuzz of ya flow n punches i aint see no personals tho nahmean but good verse overall..countree ya shit was hott but i wasn't really feelin ya ryhme scheme u had 1 punchlines and dat was ya opener..da rest was personals which were good but dat wasn't enuff

opener-dot..good flow and multis..jay nice punch but dot shit was betta

structure-a tie

punchlines-dot takes dis....jay u had like 1

multis-dot got dis..jay aint have nun

personals-jay took dis u had some good ones..dot u like wun

finisher-dot good personal fam...jay ya shit was aight but could of came harder than dat *pause*

enjoyed-j dot...his shit was betta overall da flow was good and punches were landin..jay if u would of spit a lil more and soem cleva shit in there maybe u would of won but u didn't

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