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Old 01-28-05, 03:50 PM   #18
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Voted For: CounTREE Jay

J Dot

Step in da ring, I'll assassinate ur Nok out dreams
Watch out fien, JDOT got him NOK OUT KINGZ
block out teams, especially when yall shout out schemes
tryna beat us is rare, like seein a fake watch gleam
Little simple but i liked. Flowed very well. 9/10

i got that beam, send it to you, watch yall scream
i block yall theme...cock back and drop yall team
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves
Last bar sounded kinda rasict but i liked the way it flowed and the punch landed. 8/10

i admit im amazed, this nigga really want it with J?
i dont like gays.....so back up and go that way
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks
Simple and not landing well but flowed pretty good. 7/10

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
u gettin no mo' digits.....landing in yo winnin column
.....call him, invisible? how, J DOT still saw him
Nice closer. You know it. Flowed very but I wans't feeling it. 7/10

J Dot. You had nice flow but I wasn't really feeling ur punches. You gotta come harder. I know for a fact you can merk anyone. Just keep trying. lol. over all. your rating was 31 all together. lol.



-CJ-

Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
Liked it but it coulda flowed better. 7/10

Pyro for just one battle? What, couldn't take the heat?
Soon expelled from the site, to win, you'll hafta cheat.
Don't know if he cheated before but it woulda good personal. I liked it. 10/10

Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Pretty good. I thought it was a hard punch. Nice. 10/10

Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
Nice personal. i guess. Nice punch. 8/10

You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
Weak closing. Knew it coulda been better. 7/10

I saw alot of hard and complex punches in ur verse. really liked it. you got this wif harder punches. I took alot of time to vote on this so i know it is honest.42 was ur over all rating.



RTF Pwease.

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