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Old 01-28-05, 04:10 PM   #14
MaRVJay
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whut da fukk y u spit like 100 bars?? damm....4 no reason...and both ya'll structures is crazee but ya cinnamon ya shit is worse than jr.'s..cinnamon u look like u stepin ya shit up but alot of lines u said were just wack first fix ya structure then ya ryhme scheme and work on ya punchlines try da be creative with it fam....jr ya shit was hott u didn't hav any personals and ya punchline concepts were original but dont make ya bars dat long u gotta work on dat but u took dis cuzz of creativity...

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^^he's scared.lol
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