ok drop, good structure, nice flow. topics ok.

What i would suggest though, is get rid fo saying.. da dis dat den.
seen as this is text and not audio, slang makes it wak.use proper grammar and it will make yur peice better.
You start to stretch your bars towards the end, try keep them around the same syllable. rhymes could of been more tech. but this is an ok drop.
you need to leave a link aswell fam.