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Old 01-28-05, 05:59 PM   #8
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Voted For: Legend

Legend
Vocabulary Was Decent, Had Some Nice Punches That I Enjoyed, Structure Was Neat,What Was A Down Fall Was Multi's You Could Use A Little Of That, And Throw In Some Meta's..But OverAll Nice Verse Man....8/10

Four
Wow You Had Good Punches And Ish But Your Vocabulary Was Plain Old Basic And You Had No Rhyme Scheme Not multi's Nor Meta's Personals Was Good But Could Of Done A Better Job On That

Structure=Tie
Vocabulary=Legend
Meta's=Legend
Multi's=None
Punches=Tie

Vote=Legend..Return The Favor Man, Link In Sig


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