Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond

Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,*
^good opener

So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch,
Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich,
^no real punch...

This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared,
Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there,
^good but bit self-glorification

On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty,
Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly',
^decent

Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit,
I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!"
^not feeling it

Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake,
You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..**
^nice closer

Your opener and closer were best things in your verse in fact. Didn't have too many hardhitting and bold punches or personals,you did have some good wordplay in there though.Flow was straight on point,vocab was good and structure was nice to. Just get the punches lil harder...


MC IgGY

My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE
My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE
^self-glorification...

I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN
take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN
^2nd line was okay

You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME
me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND
^good bar...liked it...

Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS
I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS
^decent decent

what kind of name is Onestepbeyond
u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found.
^had potential but could've set it up better

You used a lot of self-glorification, always bringing yourself up instead of bringing the other one down (which is the main principal of a battle). Try to focus on your opponent instead of yourself, more hardhitting punches and personals. Wordplay was good, vocab n structure were tigh and I was feelin your flow but get more agressive in the punches and such...No hate...

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