Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Dio Deus
Dio Deus
I've already set the battle up, but you just wouldn't accept it
I understand you were scared, cause my words are like black magic
^decent opener
but at least drop some of your "lines" some of those whack rhymes
you won't even see the difference between a meta and punchline
^hehe,good one
And don't be so proud of yourself cause you don't have rythm
90% of your lyics are bitten, and the other 10% is just prewritten
^like it a lot
And I can see a few people thinking well you do too
I wasted a few of this lines on cannabarz he didn’t want to loose
^doesn't do the trick...
so for me this is easy, for you it gon' be a harder fight
but after this battle you're seriously dis(sed)qualified
^okay closer
Overall good drop,had some nice punches in there,quite hardhitting in fact and not too played.Was definately feeling your flow,structure was good and vocab was okay.Tried some multi's here and there,only thing lacking is a very bold personal but it's all good...
TecKnic
Nigga I'll straight up cut ya throat
They'll put my whole verse in quotes
I already know i'm gettin all 5 votes
So sit back adn start takin notes
^decent opener
See i aitn even trying hard for this battle
I'll raise you up and kill you liike cattle
^not feelin it
cuz your like steroids hemroids
i mean you dont even know metaphysics
Ask the critics
^sorta weak...
They say i'm overrated...or outtdated
But like Em and 50 i' been paitenly waiting
^nah man...
see fuck you and fuck ya dawg too
I"ll bust a cap and kill you 2....niga
^don't like your closer
This wasn't that good to be honest with you, tried some punches but they didn't always land that hard.No personals,not always feeling your flow.Vocab was okay,structure could be lil bit better.Just try to get some more hardhitting and effective punches and personals and it'll all be good...no hate...
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