Voted For: final

Emotion-Didn't feel much emotion from either one of you. I think that Final gets this, but barely. Copywrite, some emotion, but not a lot.

Imagery-Final, decent imagery. Copywrite, had a lot of metaphors but almost no imagry. Work on imagry.

Structure-Tie, both had decent structure.

Vocabulary-Copywrite, kind of obvious you get this. Either your vocabulary is the size of a thesaurus, or you looked in one. Final, aight vocab, but inadequate compared to Copywrite.

Story Line-Neither really had one.

Flow- Final, decent flow. Your vocab helped it keep going. Fell off very little. Copywrite, didn't have any flow, at all. This would be an aight poem, but you had almost no flow.

Final, an aight drop. Not your best work though. Twilight zone thing is an ok twist, but not that great. Overall I liked it, but you've done better. 7/10

Copywrite, a topical has flow, a poem doesn't have to. Your vocab was good, except it threw off your flow to the point that you didn't have any. Listen to a beat and write a topical to that beat, because that is what a topical is. 4/10

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