Voted For: Personify

i say personify took this one.. more emotion... i like the structure.. it flows decent.... had good imagery.. just i think u overused some vocab.. and parralel u force rhymes way too much.. u really need to work on that.. and ur flow.. topical pieces should flow too.. soo good job to both im just feeling personify's more due to the good imagery and the good emotion.. but try to fix that vocab stuff.. and parralel watch out for forced rhymes...

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