Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

whoa this was a tight topical battle.....but yuall check it

flow:
ight man you had some real good stucture here alot improved there and the vocabulary was so great i liked the emotion you gave and the creavity you gave with metas...nice mix....some pretty good imagery here....a very nice verse from you im feeling it alot...

Untreacable:
sry if i spelt your name wrong but shit you had some very nice stucture too alright vocab but kinda weak for emotion and creativty lacked imagery so thos are probably the biggest reasons i would say ou lost this...but you did have a good verse just not quite good enough.......no hate pz

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