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Old 01-29-05, 06:40 PM   #27
Parallel
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Old School
ok yours is straight dry had a floppy beat and skitty flow to it....it was alll backwards...wasent feeling it at all....up your punches i didnt see to much creativty in there...hmm i just thought you need to up your vocals a bit more and thats pretty much the reason you lost...o and punches

Limited Eddition
that was pretty good..i loved the creativty you had with the funny punchlines haha. good flow the vocals were good i liked your verse alot very good choice for a beat pretty nice...the reaosn im giving you this is cuz its just alot better...no hate to anyone

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