Voted For: J DOT

Hmmm....both had good verses...but I believe J Dot got this for overall a better verse...imagery was nice...story was good...voab was a'ight...flow was off in places, btu structure was still intact...Deception....short verse...you need to make it longer...and you need to work on your imagery and vocab...not much of a story due to length...you have potential...keep workin at it...no hate.

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