Voted For: Kesse

Kesse

you step up in face and act like you the king of this site
but putting you in place and upping my wins will be my delight
^decent but no punch...

you thought you could be beat me, i dont know how you figured
all you had to do was look in the mirror to see a 'pussy nigger'
^good good

you insult and annoy me, you dont do that, so i know you can't be sober
and by-the-way, ghosts not in style unless its the end of october
^love 2nd line,1st could've been better

you spit so much shit, that you must be a freak
with an ass for a mouth, your the worst kind of unique
^okay bar

your too pathetic thats why my winnings will grow
i'm gunna rip you apart, so you better learn to sew
^not feeling it

i thought that being a ghost, you would have learned from past events
should think things out first, , your time is spent, too late to repent
^love 1st one,didn't feel 2nd as much

to paint up your bedsheet and challenge me your pretty brave
just call me Egon, your busted, now get back to your grave
^nice closer

Overall good drop, had some nice creative punches n personals in there, made me laugh here and there.Good wordplay,was also feeling your flow. Vocab n structure were straight on point,no bad comments on that.Just keep it up,solid verse!


Black Ghost

Nigga u fucked up cuz u pissed me off.Tryna act hard but my bullet tips'll leave ya soft/
^doesn't do the trick for me...

Cuz im bout tired of u talkin all dat shit/
I gota banana clip dat'll leave yo ass split/
^no punch...

Im from da westside, bankhead to b exact/
the pump go boom bullets hit ya, ya go crack/
^nah man...

so u can talk shit da tech'll blow off ya head/
ya go 2 hell or heaven dont mata long as ya dead/
^decent i guess

all rap verse Know ya lame an even if ya tried ya couldnt spit/
if every member in rap verse had they hand up yo ass they still wouldnt b feelin ya SHIT!!!!
^okay closer

Wasn't that good in fact,didn't have any hardhitting punches or personals in there and you used self-glorification a lot, always talking about blowing his head off and shit...that doesn't make you win battles...Vocab was decent,structure could be better and flow was okay but improve on those punches and such...no hate though...

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