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Old 01-30-05, 07:52 AM   #25
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Voted For: Metaskriptz

Metaskriptz

My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack
I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack
^okay opener

WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik
Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip
^like it

Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it
You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked
^lmao...good...

8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's
So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me,
^good closer

Overall solid drop,love your internal rhyming which definately improves your flow a lot.Structure was okay and vocab was tight,liked your wordplay to.Had some nice creative punches in there,no real bold personals but you had good creative things in your verse...Enjoyed reading it...


WerdSmith

Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine.
I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine!
^haha,funny shit...

Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded.
...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted.
^liked 1st line,not feeling 2nd though

Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/
Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his
verse, obviously they thought it was a feast!
^hmmm,doesn't do trick for me...

I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed.
And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!.
^good closer

Good drop from you to: flow,structure and vocab were straight on point.Wordplay was nice,had funny and creative punches/personals which even made me laugh here and there. Too bad you kinda fell of towards the end in my opinion,no hate though because I thought this was very close battle but my vote goes to MetaSkriptz...
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