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Old 01-30-05, 12:41 PM   #8
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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse- o alright, you nice for a newb...Punches was good, still elevated. Wordplays was nice, i like the satan, god line, shit was very creative. Structure needs help though.....Flow kinda chopped up........



Gutter shad- Punches was kinda basic, flow was fucked up.....Structure needs elevation......Wordplay's was nice...the weakest link in your verse was just flow...and punches being so basic....wordplay's was nice though





overal= Alright, this an one-sided battle....Gutter shad, you had some basic punches and the flow was fucked meaning your structure fucked too.....Elevate on punches....and strucuture......Kesse, you had a nice verse...with some good punches...wordplay's was nice very creative...punches was very effective...Kesse gets my vote, cause of harder punches....Gutter shad you came basic with them punches...Kesse came harder



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