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Voted For: Armada Da 187
Shorty#1- Alright, basic punches, meaning they're weak. Flow was kinda chopped up, elevate on that. Add some multi'z in your verses. Structure was wack. Wordplays was weak "pitbull" line was weak fam.
Armada-Armada (A-R-M-A-D-A) fo sho
Shorty (H-O-M-O) HOMO!!
^^ that aint even necessary, we can read...
Nice puncehs, elevate though. Basic. Nice flow. Wordplays was good still elevate on that. Add multi'z in your verse. Put personals in there too
overall=Wack battle, both heads need some serious elevation. Shorty, your punches was basic and weak, elevate. Flow was fucked. Structure was wack. Wordplays was weak. Armada, ok punches was basic, needs elevation. The punches was effective. Wordplays was good, still need elevation. Add personals and some multi'z. I gots to give this battle to armada basically because he had harder puncehs and flow. Elevate though. Shorty elevate on puncehs you lost this battle cause your punches was played and weak. wun
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