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Old 01-30-05, 02:27 PM   #7
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Judicial-MY dawg with them mean multi'z ha, nice job fam. Punches was good, with them multi'z....Punches was "eh" ok. need elevation though....Wordplays was nice. flow was decent. multi'z hit hard fam nice job.



Gutter shad- i see you've took my advice, structure you've elevated nice fam, Punches was good, flow "eh" dont stretch your lines fam. Add multi'z like "Judcial". You need to work on grammer fam.


overall=Close battle, I cant vote cause judicial is in my crew. But this will be a close one

good luck on the polls judicial, wun
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