View Single Post
Old 01-30-05, 04:46 PM   #8
phive
Lyrically Unchallenged
 
phive's Avatar
 
Posts: 867
From: Bethany ontario canada
IP:

Voted For: Shi-1

aight baby nice werk
multis shi
hits shi
opener shi
closer tie
yo you need ta werk on makin your rhymes less spaced out
and everything will go smoother

yo mafia man your multies are shit dawg werk on ya structure too and your lines are too short anyway nice battle dawg but i gotta give it to tha miss this time playa
__________________
Phive Is standing Tall