goddamn!!!! this was the biggest prewritten shit i've eva read... im not voting cuz i dont think this battle was fair. i'll give you some tips from a vet tho... dont make ur verse all fancy wit caps and shit... that makes me really not want to read it at all ya know... quotes are ok but all that other stuff is reeeeeeallly gay. to improve: dont make ur lines so looooong... they seem to drag on forever which really cuts ur flow back... work on ur punches some more because they seem really played and simple. aight ~1~