Cali
no hate or anything but you shouldnt not try for any battle but you did go good but ive seen alot better from you...your vocab wasnt really there for most of this
multis i didnt notice any really, the stucture lacked towards the bottom of the verse
flow was kinda weak..kinda streched lines liek the syllable count was off
but your verse wasnt all that bad you had good imagery and creativty thats good but the little things were bad for your verse...no hate or anything ight

D-ception
pretty good i should say the first verse was badly lacking stucture and flow but the 2nd part of it stood up for it with some very good vocab and creativty some pretty good god damn imagery and some great flow and the stucture was better in the 2nd verse as well, your a very skilled newbie you must be from a different site but anyway good verse from both of you im giving this to D-ception

VOTE: d-cËpt!0n


REALLY RIDICULES THIS VOTE IS FOOLISH AND DUMB AS FUCK I SHOULD DQ IT BUT IM GOING TO BED AND IM TOO TIRED TO CARE RIGHT NOW BUT THIS IS A GOOD EXAMPLE ON HOW NOT TO RATE A POETRY BATTLE FLOW STRUTURE <<NONO AND MY VOCAB WAS WAY BETTER THEN HIS ANYWAYS MAYBE ILL DQ THIS GAYNESS TOMMOROW TOO TIRED NOW ONE