Only the Illist
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Voted For: Golden shellz
aight good battle from both of you.. but could have been better.... break down:
Golden- ya verse was aight... bad structure tho, it was stretched and in some places under developed... but it didnt hurt ya over all flow to bad but still work on it... your punches were aight but ya personals kicked ass, i liked em a lot.. good stuff... vocab was aight , would have liked to have seen some mulitis tho... ya closer about strobe was clasic, had me laughin lol... any way good verse... 6.5/10
lantis- aight man ya verse was iffy at best... for starters ya structure just didnt work man, shit was stretched to the max... flow was hurt by this but some of the flow was still kinda tight... i was diggin some of ya punches and personals, nothing spectacular but they were aight... ok vocab but up on em... overall this was an iffy verse 4/10
no hate to lantis but elevate a lil bit homie, youll get there no worries... and golden just work on ya structure... werd...........
VOTE- GOLDEN.............
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