intro is weak.....carsonjet is not wack......<<not d/r just facts


this seemed like your reading from your screen


anyway

you need lots more emotion....also raise your voice and try to get your lisp fixed.....
that shit is mad distracting....
you lyrics where nice but your flow was oof in some points...try to memorize atleast some of your lines....also you biggest downfall is your dubbing....you need to lower that volume and add a echo.....

all in all you are good at text but need alot of elevation in audio....

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