Voted For: lyrical scripts

this battle was kinda weak. didnt really see any killer punches or mettas that made me wunna drop my jaw. i think if these were audio, i wouldve prolly been more excited. but this was kinda weak.
i dunno why im gunna do this. but ima give this one to LS, even tho his verse was kinda softer, but i dunno. i was feelin his more. he had more personals in there, and better personals that made me wnna give him my vote. i think u should elevate a lot tho, cuase i wasnt feelin it that much, and it was kinda weak. ur lines were stretched. so i think u should work on that. and ur structure was off. but overall, i tink u came out on top in this one. i dunno, just my opinion.
BO-u had a nice verse, but i think yo verse was kinda played out. most of ur barz were played. i didnt see too muche creativitie in ur verse. but i was feelin tha structure. thats one up for u, but i think that wasnt good enough. i think u should elevate more on creativness and harder punches. ur punches were kidna soft, and didnt really land in tha right places.
overall-this battle wasnt all that to me, i think yall should work on a couple of things. yall not weak, but ur verses werent that hard. not too many punches landed in tha right areas in this one. but i still think LS came out on top, and snuck thru tha door with tha win....good shit LS

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but good battle, close one, but i think yall should elevate...NO HATE BO, just come a lil harder next time, thats all....its just one vote