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Old 01-31-05, 04:37 PM   #17
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Voted For: Blac-Out

overall, i think it was pretty close, but couple reasons just made me vote for blac-out
-lyrical, you were a little lackin in all departments, flow was very choppy, butchered, had good orginality and multis were in there, but structure was bad, punches were weak, personals werent hittin, just overall, you came out too soft i think, gotta make those punches do some damage, finisher was prolly the best line in there, nice try, elevate man

-blac-out, didnt really come hard either, but thats okay, he didnt at all, nice finisher, probs your best line too, little unflowing in the middle, but other than that, nice ring to it, good structure, punches and personals, work on those some more, but other than that, solid drop, keep elevatin man,

->takin blac-out, harder punches, better flow, came harder, word
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