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Troop
good stucture flow was decent....the emotion wasnt quite there the imagery was weak but the creativty was pretty good....good vocab hard choice i didnt think you would be this good at topicals...but try working on using more emotion and it would give you more of an advantage if you would of had better emotion you woulda got this...no hate

@.
not very good stcutre but the flow was there....the imagery was great but the creativty wasnt really there as much....the vocab was decent not to great but some good words used....and the emotion is what got you this....good job...pz

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