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IP:
Voted For: @.
close battle.
after being apart in anxiety's "topical review"
thread, i read these verses with a completely
new and valid perspective. read both verses
twice through. and they were good.
@'s best lines:
all the Blood donours are my only grace
Im speeding to deaths finish line,in a lonley race
Troop's best lines:
Brung my Life to a Deadly Outclose do to these Out Hoes
On the Corner Exposeing themselves Wearing Little Clothes
Disklikes:
*@ was blunt
*troop was vulgar
Likes:
*@ has some strong views
*troop has nice story struct
verdict:
i hate to say this but.....i felt more like someone with AIDS as i read @'s verse. i felt the emotion, & the neglect you would receive having been an AIDS victom. i liked lines about struggle. all good to read. nice verses both...but honestly im going with @. on this one.
vote: @
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