Voted For: Copywrite

arright I thought both peices were at least average, w/ one being much better.. Final- your verse was descriptive, but the flow of the verse was real choppy- you didn't have the imagery copywrite brought.... it was almost like you both approached the topic in a very similar way, but copywrite had a much more descriptive, and worded verse... flow wise i found it stronger... and like I said I think he had a better grasp of what direction he wanted the verse to go. not bad either of you- but I vote copywrite.

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