The Ups and Downs of Life
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Voted For: d.j em sce
Dj- i like that make us wait before you spit...real audible verse... some of your words kinda fight for presence in a verse-- its hard to explain-- but work on making your bars more fluid... punches were pretty good, verse was a little short, but not bad... could have faded it out at the end or something... not bad--
Prem- I think you came on real solid- you really improved in the delivery department-- presence could still use building- your lines were pretty good- only thing is you really had to listen to your verse cuz of your pronounciation of certain words.... carryin on at the end...lol ive done it, but its reccommended u dont...lol not a bad joint either... this is a hard battle to vote on. yo.. i just cant do it... this shit was dope... I could give it prem for makin it more of a complete track... or dj for really just buildin a little drama-- hittin him hard and then peace.... arright.. i decided Ive listened to each track like 6 times... and Im givin it to Dj-- his verse is just alot easier to hear, and break down- a little too much self glorification- but prems jumped off real hard and kinda got stagnant... keep doin ur thang both of you-- hot shit here....vote dj emscee
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