Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

yo, foreal I thought both of these were real good peices... Flows - well it Flowed real well- I love the way you ended- real strong... every line coincided with the next, no blockiness or trouble reading-- everything i'd expect...
DJ's- you could tell you were really feelin what you wrote cuz it was real to you, but it seemed like you had a little more trouble finding a way to make it all fit into this peice and keep the bolded side correct... and for that I think the entire peice kind of suffered, but it does make a very nice gesture... good shit both- but vote Flow.

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