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Old 02-01-05, 01:40 AM   #49
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Voted For: Infurno

wow.. I know neither of you- no hate to anyone, but Infurno just shitted all up on mistas grill... lemme break it down.

Infurno u pursue fire well my punches are cold I’m gonna take your fire out
My rhymes are sweet, giving you cavaties, putting multiple holes in your mouth
simple simple rhyme-- out and mouth... punches were basic- no real thought necessary to your lines... very cut and dry.
Kid you cant handle me. Like your basketball home team, they cant handle balls
They cant even shoot, like your punches you wont connect through an net dawg
balls and dawg is a forced rhyme-- maybe u could pull it off on a track.. but not here... dissin the chicago bulls?
Like your Chicago bulls jerzey I’ll leave multiple holes with bloods all over your body
I’m leaving you with no power like Michael Jordan left the bulls, and also like scottie
if you spent some time and re-worded this- you could have had a nice bar... as it is its real basic, no wordplay anywhere, nothing hit hard... keep writing, and peep some of the assistance threads.


AuTh3nTiQ? this fake's a swingman he cant throwback a punch/
im like a football playa the way im fuckin AuTh3nTiQ's up/

I felt this bar alone could win the battle... its a pretty funny punchline- it struck well... your 3 bars all had decent punches... you could tell you just have more experience than your opponent here... keep doin it... vote infurno.
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