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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
im gonna have 2 give this one 2 flow
i liked dj with the letters and shit
that was some tight shit righ there
yours lines were kinda stretched a lil
you tried 2 fit 2 many words into ya lines
kinda like how i did wit my 1st topical
one of the reasons im loseing lol
but um overall it was a deep poem
but ima go wit flow
for a better flow and more direct
righ 2 the point and more of a direct
type of letter..nice wordplay
and good emotion...good concepts
and nice way 2 put em 2 words
nice battle
*Nuff Said*
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