The Ups and Downs of Life
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Voted For: New Era
Homie you've just got exposed, like a bed without a "matress"
No wonder you rap like the next B2K "Actress"
I run this shit everyday like i'm "King Of The Hill"
A "birth control pill" was something you failed on "affording"
quit the rap game, go back to your "hobby" skate "boarding" with the great "T.I.P"
Even in the holiday inn "lobby" it's obvious why u never got a "D.I.P"
I got the guerilla warfare, like a European wild boar runnin on "fours"
I'm always open in the camera, unlike your congested "buttholes"(2likewomen)
I felt all in all your verse was sloppy- flow was sacrificed in many spots- punches were so so- you had some nice shit- but most of your lines were very fillerish... not great for text-- might sound good audio though.
I said im pretty tight why can't you coward's see
each line is defined you bitein hard like babys begining to Teethe*
You gotta stop im comeing threw ya with skill's of poppin shit
Fuck a integra weak cause you blow up when taking massive BODY HITS
You a herb exspecting to feed while i expirtease my personal blows
break you're bones, you stay playin wit phones while im harder than stones
Put a heata toasta that will roast-ya straight to integra's chest
You Got no skill's in this world you're like 50 accualy tryna dress
I wont come at you wit my best, got guns ill put a mac to ya ronald
And make you tell more " Fat " " Lie's " Than that bitch Rosie o' donald
New Era- I think u shared some of the same problems ur opponent-- you both chose some simple rhymes-- yours had a better structure to it, made it easy to read... your punches as well were off in most spots... however even though ur best punches were kinda basic like 50 tryna dress I think u were more effective... vote New Era.
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