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Old 02-01-05, 02:03 AM   #25
Know-Gimix
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Voted For: Phantom

Phantom try to compete bitch..its gonna take a lot more to defeat this
When i dont even have to speak shit.. to leave this 'killer' speechless
decent opener-- but punch is meh.. not what i expect
I toss rockets in a vicious spark... you get by with spittin darts
So treat ya verse like a dutch blunt... and watch it get ripped apart
decent-- dutch blunt dont exist tho... dutchies and blunts dont coexist in same rapper... punch is understood but still, kinda seemed forced.
Then blazed and smoked..Amazed im dope ? Son just wait for votes
Get abrazions slow... Socrates battlin me was stupid take some notes
this was a good bar, good stop go flow, no punches more self glorification but thats cool...
I'll delete ya quick with lyrics harsh that i zoom with
Kid couldnt be a 'Gorilla' even if he was part of a 'Unit'
simple punch, kinda effective not bad..
Leave you swollen and broke erasing and folding ya flows
Cuz i got the whole world shook like Ali holding a globe
lol... this was kinda funny- not a relevant concept, but not bad.
Im a killer of course... I employ guns when i pull it
Have ya corpse..on the curb playin dodgeball with bullets
lol... o.k ill give u this one.
I always throw crazed punches... to land pyscho hits
I'll let you 'beat me' if you like just not in a battle bitch
eh.. hits bitch, easy rhyme... simple closer... i expected more... but not bad in general...


Punk bitch with a bold name, thinkin you everyones hero
Only 1/4 ya skill?Damn, didn't know you could divide zero!
LoL-- this was solid right here... nice opener.
..See i'm sick with the flow so it's no doubt that it's over
Cuz in the battle its like ya name,intelligent finishes lower!
o.k
Look at ya name kid, and theres no way you can own me
Cuz..
..what ya name means to me is Front Lines Winner ONLY!
lol wow... creative, i liked it.
And yes nigga I know it's not a very big thing to own you
Youre a bitch and a mod of a forum nobody even goes to!
lol... he got personal on every line. damn
And it's crazy the way I easily rip ya spine and ya bladder
Funny, it's your fault that in text.......flow doesn't matter!
lol... nice wordplay, solid punch again. Im feelin this alot so far.
I'm rippin you simply,plus now ya whackness is announced
Shit, even ya AIM name proves "slinky" needs to "bounce"!
Im not down w/ his aim name or whats goin on here.. but ima play like i know whats goin on...
So please, just quit, and go somewhere else with ya rap b
Ill put a red dot on ya forehead quicker than teens wit acne!
lol... not a super original concept... but I think all in all his verse hit alot harder, alot more witty- alot more to the point-- vote phantom.
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