flow is pretty good...
song means a lot, which is cool
vocab could be better
good beat
good hook...i like it
make your songs a little more complexe rhyming schemes...
this was good though, could be better...you have more in you, you are improving a lot, and pretty fast...your flow was a lot better in the 2nd verse also...
you are almost overdoing your rhyming word sometimes, just keep the flow, and throw a double on top of it...
this was good though...nice hook

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