vocabis kinda weak.....and the way you sound is not that great...i hate how your flow is perfect..your exact..uasully that is good but its not that wonderfull with you....

i feel your emotion...i just hate that perfectness......im feeling this shit,,,could use more emotion...although this has lots of emotion in it your voice lacks emotion.....
lyrics are good...
1st..nice shit but vocab could be alot better....other than that..nice shit...

chorus.. nice chorus...
kinda catchy...

2nd... that verse was better thanthe 1st verse...nice shit..not great but good...
im feeling these lyrics because this is how i feel about my girl

3rd...this verse has bad quality..need to just try to spit all of your verses at the same time...other than that nice shit,,..


well this is a good song...i bet you got ad pussy after this..lolj/k

but yeah do you wanna collab with another type of song liek this....becuase i feel the same way about my girl the way you feel abotu your girl...

so do you wanna collab...
if so choose the beat but make sure it is better than this one

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