Thread: Life As It Is
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Old 02-01-05, 06:02 AM   #12
mizz fyre
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this drop was pretty good, i think you put some emotion into it, though sometimes you used simple vocab and the lines were stretched it still flowed pretty well,
i gotta look deeper into myself and learn to quit runnin from life

^^^i liked this line.....keep doing it 8/10......
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