Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name
weak and simple... not good.
Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch
Im not really feelin it, but Ill give u this one. decent punch.
Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like
Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life
eh, your rhyme scheme is very very simple- and your insults are similar. Try to up the content in the future.
Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen
Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again
yea yeah... o.k
Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit

man-- ur rhymin picked up here... but this punch could have hit so much harder if you spent some time and re-worded it... as it is now its just average all the way through. Really work on upping the content of your verses.



mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run
p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum
wow, u both need to up your content... weak weak opener
in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1
decent personal, probly the best bar so far in the battle...
im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?...
his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by"
rhyme scheme is real sloppy- punch is horriffic- in a not good way.
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records"
arright... this isn't the most original concept but at least its a bonofide punchline w/ a lil wordplay... thank you.
sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds....
u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig
could have written it better- saying got illdiplomats and got eystyle just like that kills any flow to that point.... but good route of attack.
my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome
crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own"
real basic, but o.k
u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer
o.k-- not a great closer... however you threw more punches than ur opponent... you connected more, I found that your verse while being fairly basic was more complex than your opponents also... Vote MarvJay

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