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Old 02-01-05, 02:31 PM   #18
Know-Gimix
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Voted For: anxiety

Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap...
lol this was a creative punch...humerous.
Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away...
And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced...
..............................................At faking your gay...
lol, not bad... punch was kinda basic, but effective.
You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text...
But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect...
eh, not really feelin this bar
It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better...
But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record...
lol this was funny... nice bar, good setup and punch.. feelin it.
Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay...
But your officially the worst emcee of the year...
................................................An d it's only the first day...
lol- not the most original concept, but decent closer... all in all u coulda came harder, but this was a pretty good verse.

You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again?
And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin
good opener- creativity- a little wordplay-
And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying
You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons
this is o.k-- "Broaden your Horizons"- but if it fit in the sentence better- then the wordplay and punch would have been improved... as it is its nice, but u coulda made this knockout.
I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here
I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years
blah... not feelin it.
Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before
But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls
lol-- again, u come w/ some pretty nuts concepts but when you word em- your only 90% there... so I know what ur tryin to say, but u dont say it with the kick u could.
So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork
We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks
corks dorks-- blah, not feelin, too basic for a closer..... looks like you began o.k but kinda stumbled in a few of ur concepts-- a little more work and it could have been a real nice peice.

I think anxiety was more consistent in this... Phantom could have won in my oppinion if he worked more on the last two bars... but they just fell off, and the verse really suffered... anxiety was decent straight through... Vote Anxiety.
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