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Old 02-01-05, 03:23 PM   #21
~Luciano~
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run
p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum
4/10
in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1
6/10
im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?...
his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by"
7/10
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records
"7/10
sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds....
u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig
4/10
my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome
crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own"
7/10
u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer
1/10

u had nice concepts
punches were kinda lame
ya wordplay wasent there
ya intensity wasent there
nice Multi's
and Metas
could of worked on your delivery
and punches


Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name
4/10
Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch
6/10
Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like
Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life
5/10
Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen
Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again
5/10
Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit
6/10

punches were ok
no real wordplay
ya drop could have been better
ya concepts were nice
ya drop was kinda basic
seen alot better from u
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