Voted For: The Black Plague

Black Plague~your flow is good here, structure,but some of your lines are a little stretched, your opener was great,good wordplay.."hard heade like a lead dick", good bar...and personal on his other battle with wackestmc, i liked your vocabulary in this verse,one of your best lines was the tsunami line,"ya face was beach,i'll throw one to the shore","since ya moms only had wack ass to give me the win,i guess i owe one to the whore",THIS WAS YOUR BEST., well written, i also liked how you used names of celebs in your punches, very creative lines and effective bar with the tom cruise, mission impossible line..lol@the houston rockets line, your closing bar started off strong, but i think kurt cobain lines are played, but overall strong verse....good job.
marv~your opener wasn't that strong here, try to use words instead of abbreviations, to fit it all in, it seemed like you struggled, watch the spelling too, lol@the "fruit" done had a lot of dicks in his adams apple", dope bar there, nice wordplay with "BrOad pen is", i liked your closing bar, you had some good wordplay, but i dont think your verse was as effective as Black's..i just thought he had better punches....overall tight battle both..1

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