Voted For: Viper

*GHOSTE*

I guess dis dudes rhymes can be considered pretty sick/
cause i was readin his other battle, and i threw up when i read dat shit/
^bit played but still cool opener

when dis dude wheres his seatbelt, das da only time hes strapped/
and his verse is what my baseball bat said to his face...WACK!!!/
^okay okay

i dont understand how he can claim to be a gangsta/
when its obvious dis cat packs less heat then refrigerators/
^rhyming is weak...kinda played...

wit a name like viper, id expect u to spit venom/
but u aint poisinon me, cause im spillin blood on ya denim/
^decent

Overall decent drop but could've used mor creative and bold personals or punches.Vocab was okay,structure nice and you had your flow on lock.But as I said,you had some played stuff in there,try to avoid that...no hate...


Viper

i tripped across your profile and it seems your wacker than expected,
so you think your connected, selling drugs well your geting lyrically infected,
^okay...

your wrecked kid, your 13 years old you cant even spell a simple word,
now you can write a verse, thats gotta be the gayest thing that ever occured,
^hehe,nice

i take it you like to scare people theexorcist4747, you'll be familiar with 666,
flip it upside down you got 999 you'll be dialing that number with a head full o bricks,
^good good

ill give it four more lines considering i asked for ten seems you cant even read,
you should give up and pleed, this druggy has been taking too much speed,
^funny shit...

i posted this verse in 7 minuts or less, i dont need to waste time on a rookie,
it's sad to see this cat come up and get put down to be crumbled like cookies,
^good closer

Like your style,it's like you're telling a story and dissing him but in a laid back kinda way...You had nice personals,tracked him down a little which is good of course.Not too much played lines,kept it all tight.Multis definately upped your flow,vocab and structure are tight to.Solid drop!

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